Lost in time

Hello,
Nice shot you got here unfortunatly there are a few elements that reduce it's impact and take away from it's quality. First of all the framing.the man should follow the rule of thirds and be sitting at bottom left hand corner intersection thus giving a much more marked sensation of stillness of the subject and tranquillity as he contemplates whatever it is what he is looking at. The second element is a question of exposure - you gamma should be 0.05/0.1 point darker (easy correction on PS) - a pity the picture came with a bit of micro-skaking (not too noticeable but costed a bit of points on the tecnique since with a 1/10 of a second in a picture liek this there should be no micro-shaking.

The idea was quite good and title expresse it very well, yet unfortunatly the tecnique mistakes take a lot away from the final result.

Hope this is useful,
Good shooting to you,

Nicola <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="391" title=" (Smile)"/>